LoneEagle's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spam has lost the plot!]

This would make a nice intro sequence.

A very energetic loop that could use a slightly more developed melody in my opinion. The drums are good but i find them a bit too "hyped up" to my taste, well for that kind of beat anyways.

The part where the drums stop and you have only the guitars playing made me think of Mega Man for some reason...

So you lost the plot... what does that mean? Well all i can say is that i enjoyed this loop and i voted you a 5 on it.

P.S. I read somewhere i don't remember the place but you said you were sick and needed to go for a scan or something? Well... take care of yourself :)

SpamWarrior responds:

Yeah the melody is beyond poor, nothing matches really in this track, hence me having lost the plot. I just made what occured and sounded good at the time, n soon as i realised i couldnt take it further, i knew i'd lost it. *wonders if ever had it in the first place*
Yeah i'm a bit ill, i'll be reet in a bit i reckon tho. Ta for the review i'll check you tomorrow.

[-586rick- Cut man]

Ahh this brings back the memories...

This is a good remake. You added a litle bit of your personal touch to it and i think that it's great.

The only thing wrong with me here is that your first sound, the one on the highest note, the one that goes tu-tut really quick... well it is way louder than the other sounds and it should be taken down a notch.

For the rest it's all good. Keep it up.

586rick responds:

I see your point there, hmm, I don't know why I didn't see it before I put it here, anyway, thanks for the help and the review.

[Land Mine--_--]

Very very bad ass!!!

This song is awesome! The feel, the atmosphere the lack of words to describe it :D

The intro kicks ass, the part in the middle before the chorus is too repetitive to my taste. The rest is great until the end. The only thing i would change is the volume level of your cymbals (the one that's always playing on the regular pattern you know the one... sorry for lack of better description). I think it's a tad too high.

Great work on this little song. The thing is that you have 6 pages of songs and chron has 7 :P so you are not yet the AP whore! j/k

P.S. Hey do i get a magical review too? Ha! That's right i might not post often in the forums but i lurk alot and i know when there are free giveaways :)

PERVOK responds:

A magical review spell you will get cast on you!
And I'm the 3rd audio whore... Comet and Chrono have me beat out, I know. But they signed up in '04, I signed up in '05. I think I'm a tad bit more whoreish :P

Thanks for the review!

[|\-The Chase-Xtreme/|---[Demo]]

Too short...

i know it's a demo and i hope that this will be finished one day. Also please change the snare drum that you are using, it's not the best one out of the FL selection.

Other than that, everything looks fine and i'm sure that the full version will pack twice as much punch compared to this one.

itsameyayo responds:

I sure hope so! Alright, snare drum change noted. I'll get more sounds later though, hehehe!

-Thanks much!

-SuperDrummer146

[TJS-Latino Casino]

Yes just like everyone else...

not because i'm a groupie but let me tell you what i was thinking about when i heard this song.

Intro - kick ass beat and ready for action

Then - Hurray! Free yogurt popsicles for everyone! XD

Again - back to some major ass kicking final fight or something.

It is though very original that i'll give you. it sure kept me entertained for a while. Good job but i'm 100% sure that you can do better.

itsameyayo responds:

I'm 200% sure I could do better, I just need the full version, lol.

-Good explanation, I think it's pretty funny, hehehe!

-Thanks for the review!

-SuperDrummer146

[All is Finished]

This is beautiful...

For some reason this song made me think of Canon... no not the printer >: Pachelbel was his name if i'm not mistaken?

Ok so this is what i think in general, the beginning is sweet but it's too repetitive because it's always the 1 - 1 - 123 pattern. The final notes could have been played only once instead of 3 times i was wondering when it was going to end. But for the rest, this is a marvelous piece of piano.

Beautiful melody, keep up the good work and have a 5... it's on the house.

itsameyayo responds:

Yeah, of course it made you think of the printer, lol.

-Yeah, that song is the tightest piano in my opinion. Yeah, the ending was a screwup, understood! I'll have to change this song up a little. I do have another piano piece I'd like to share, I'm just too lazy to do it, lol!

-Thanks much!

-SuperDrummer146

[The pie song (instumental)]

Best intro ever!

Except i would have put some sirens of when nuclear bombs are incoming instead of some police ones.

What do you use to make your songs... live instruments? Anywho, this is a great song but it doesn't semm to end. I feel like your are just fading this out in the middle part. I know that this is just a demo, maybe the full version will be longer/end in a different way?

Great song, continue on your excellent music making journey ( didn't want to write "keep it up" cause i write that all the time :D )

Sandwhich-lord responds:

most of the guitar is live but i have to admit i had to speed some of the tempo up , the drums are from a sample and so is the intro guitar.
thanks for the review and the new endings gonna kik ass.

[_-=[Escalated Rage]=-_]

Very nice indeed!

Are you still using fruity loops? I'm asking this cause of these electric guitars and the pad that you used in the beginning.

And about that pad... i found it quite weird and didn't really fitted the song. The melody is very hardcore and good... very "killer".

You sure know how to compose and arrange songs in a very good manner. Everything is flowing really nicely in this song.

Volume levels are good, the only thig that i'd change is the hats volume... it sounds a bit too loud in my opinion.

The guitars started to get on my nerves a little bit after hearing the loop a couple of times in a row but i know how hard it is to come across good samples and especially electric guitars or any "real sounding" guitars for that matter.

Good job on this song, your are as good as you have always been and i don't think i need to tell you to keep it up because i know that you are smart enough to know that you make kick ass songs and i also know that you do not plan on stopping any time soon :D

P.S. I know your profile says that people can add you to msn but i wont bother you or waste your time i would only like to ask if you could drop me a review when/if you have the time... t'would really cheer me up.

MaestroSorrow responds:

Thanks GeneralLeo. You are right, i've had three people now tell me to find better guitar samples, and thankfully one ACTUALLY told me where to get better samples!

So go me!

Hi-Hat was too loud? Maybe its my earphones, I barely hear them on this end.

I'll take a gander at your songs as well, sorry for the uber delayed response ^^.

Thanks for the review, means a lot.

[Dark Hallways (Dark Version)]

Well...

I'd say it's a pretty average loop, no offense.
This applies to both songs as they are almost identical. The melody is good, the weird soud you have in the middle was not to my liking very much.

This would have been alot better if the drums would have been more present. Some snares wouldn't have hurted anybody :)

Keep it up though, you can't succeed on the first try. I'll be checking your audio in some days and i hope that you will have a new song on here.

Maverick-Studios responds:

Leo,

Thanks for the review man. Heh, yeah we made this loop a day after we got our software. We've made plenty of new ones and I'm hoping to put them up soon. You see, we're a Game Design Studio and I make it so that everyone knows the software, so you'll see much betetr songs in the future.
Regards,
The Maverick.

[Mean Elektro]

Quite enjoyable.

This song is good, but there are a few flaws. The first thing is that the intro is too long. Hearing this drum pattern 16 times in a row was a little annoying. I think that maybe just 2 times or at maximum 4 times in arow would be enough. I think that the key to making good music is to try and keep it less repetitive as possible.

Of course if you have this great 16 bars pattern that has lots of instruments playing then i don't mind at all, even if you play it twice in a row. But if it this just a snare and a kick then it needs to be short.

The rest of the song is pretty good and well made. I really like the part in the middle where it really picks up and the beat is really nice.

Keep up the good work :)

Electrik-Insult responds:

Thanks dude, i was unsure bout this track n i think ur right. I'll put a modified version on soon.