Excellent piece of work!
I like the nice intro you have here. You have some kind of heartbeat sound in the background wich i like very much.
The main part is also very good. I like the flute, the "soldier" kind of snares.
A very quiet, peaceful conclusion to this great work. I like the intonation of the bell you used, but i don't like that bell sound in particular. To me, it doesn't sound good or real.
So what story does it tell me? I'll try and keep it short.
She asks for deliverance. But he can't do it, he doesn't have the courage to do it. She is suffering, she is dying, but he loves her and won't let her go. She keeps telling him that it's for the best, that it is the only way. He has no choice, if he loves her, he must set her free.
He grabs his sword, musters "I love you", and makes sure she doesn't suffer anymore. A tear runs down his face. Anger flows through his body, he lets go a scream that seems eternal.
He runs towards his destiny, slaying all who stands in his path. All he sees his the face of the one who cursed his beloved. He finally gets to that tower, where his lover's murderer stands. The great battle begins. They are both incredible fighters. They are almost equal in skills. But the evil one his stronger and faster, and our hero gets wounded very badly.
In a final desperate act, our hero summons his greatest attack. Slashing trough his enemy like if he was nothing. The evil murderer realises that you can never underestimate the power of man. But it is too late, as blood seems to be gushing out from everywhere out of his body.
The hero falls to his knees, victorious. But the wounds are too big to be healed. But he doesn't mind. He got his revenge. As he slowly dies he tells himself "I did it, I have avenged you, I will see you soon my love."
Fin
Lol, i feel kinda of awkward, story telling is not something i'm good at. Hope you didn't fall asleep reading all that crap :D
Dark Exultation 
