LoneEagle's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Intro to]

Nice song!

I really like those strings! The beat is good too and i like the part where it changed to like "slow motion".

Your "bell" pattern i think could have been a little longer and a little more varied. The "beep" sound reminded me of someone getting and operation :D

All in all you did a great job on this track, keep it up!

xxxRaZxxx responds:

Thanks. :)

[Puppets]

Suggestions?

More snares, and a little louder too. They are pretty hard to hear.

Nice use of sound fx and good composition in general.

I think that the beat gets a little too repetitve though. And i thought that there would be some great solo in the middle part but there was none :(

You managed to do a very good job, i think that you should make more.

[Reliving the Moment]

I liked it alot!

For some reason, this song makes me think about some scientist who is creating something very evil and then his creation turns against him.

I like those plucked strings alot and the bassline also. The beat is ok, maybe could have gotten a little wilder in some places but that's just a matter of taste really.

Anyways i like this one, keep it up!

[Lyrical Dubba]

This is good...

but it is a bit too repetitive to my taste.

I like the small changes that you make to your beat along the song.It would have been good if your piano didn't follow the bassline and played an entirely different melody to accompany the other instruments.

But all in all, i think that this is a good song. Keep up the good work.

Sugardude responds:

Thanks for the review, I appreciate the feedback.
I would love to listen to some of your tracks but the soundcard is dead on this machine, I'll check it out later.

About the feedback : My stuff is often repetitive, it my big problem. It's often because I don't know what to add or change. I'll try redoing the piano part, if I get round to it.

[Night_Street]

Good stuff!

This is a good song, it makes me think of a "beat'em up" game in a stage set at night time :D

I like the bass and the piano alot and i think that they are the 2 responsible for making this song feel so "night" theme.

The beat is pretty good and i like your organ solo too.

This could easily be used as background music in flash movies. Good stuff.

[Backdrop (complete)]

Well...

this is a pretty weird song. The only place i would see this is for some bad guy's theme or something. That is only until the guitar kicks in, and I didn't enjoy that part at all. The guitar did not seem to fit in at all with the general mood of the song and it sounded off key to me.

The rest of the song was ok though. You say that the program you use for making music is limited, so i guess you should get one that isn't.

With a better program i am sure that you could do much better than that.

[Toxic Dreams]

Very weird song.

The intro is good, the melody is not bad until it gets to the point of the "solo part". The melody doesn't fit at all with the bassline and the song seems to derail from that point.

The song itself is not bad and it sets a good mood until a certain point.

I'm sure you can do better in your futur submissions. Remember that practice is the key so keep at it :D

[Cubic Zirconium]

Very catchy song!

Well at first, i thought this was going to be a typical "first song". But damn, compared to my first track, wich isn't here by the way so don't look for it :D, this is very good!

The intro scared me a little cause i thought that the hole song was going to be this way but to my surprise it turned out to be an awesome song.

Nice use of the orchestral hits. Nice song all around i must say. The only thig that i can recommend to you is to use different drum samples maybe, cause they sound a little bad in my opinion. Especially that clap, but i can't stand claps anyways so that's maybe why :D

Well if you are planing on making more tracks, and i sure recomend that you do, well you are going to gain lots of experience by making lots of tracks and by the looks of this, you will make kick ass songs.

So keep at it man, you are doing good so far!

x-Draken-x responds:

Thanks! Sorry that the drum samples annoyed you, haha. I'll experiment with stuff, and hopefully my next submission will be much better.

Thanks for the pointers and feedback!

[Modernized Church]

Well...

this is pretty weird. I really like the last 10 seconds of it. The rest is ok, but weird, but is kinda like just... well i don't know how to phrase it. It's kind of a mix of everything.

Anyways, good job on this track for being so damn original.

[Orange Monkey Super Joy]

LOL!

Cheesiest song ever :D

Plus you have that little bit of crashman's stage music from megaman 2 wich is very cool.

Nice song, very funny and very "Yeahhh" :D