LoneEagle's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[English Spring]

I like your song

Well, there are some things that need working on, but the main idea of this song is very good. I like the piano's "ascension".

One major thing is the choice of instruments, especially the drums. I feel there are alot of better instruments to chose from in fruity loops, assuming that this is what you used to make your song, i could be mistaking.

A baseline that doesn't follow the piano could have been nice, just to add a little something different in there.

The piano melody is good, i'l give you that. The beat itself, regardless of instrument choice, fits the song pretty good.

Nice work on this song.

[AOE III Civil War Theme]

Hmmm, not half-bad...

This is very good work for a first song. I think this is a good overall piece. I think what needs to be worked on is your drums. Some timpani would have sounded great in this song.

Well keep at it, i'm sure you are bound to get better with each track that you make, good luck.

[_-=[Basking in Dead Light]=-_]

Well look at you...

You've become quite the mister popular. I see alot of gold and it ain't no fool's gold i can tell you that.

All the reviewing you are doing and all the hard work on your music is really paying off isn't it?
Well congratulations on all the good things that are and that will be coming your way.

Now onto the song. It's great XD You tricked me though, with the intro you had and with the title and the description i was expecting something with a little less beat.

At first i saw exactly what you had described "Standing around the dead, the moon, his only source of light, showing him the destruction" but then there was still more destruction to come because the final battle was about to begin - insert big story here -

The only thing that i didn't enjoy as much as the rest of the song is the snare drums. They seem to playing on a too high note. I hope you'll know what i mean. They sound kinda like claps and kinda like drums.

You sure are becoming something big out here on the AP, keep it up :D

MaestroSorrow responds:

cuz its a very very messed up snare drum, argh, how I regret putting that sucker in there, heh, good thing I messed it up here and not... uh... somewhere importantly important.

I didn't mean to trick you XD, sometimes my stories take you by the hand, and just drag you to where they want to go.

Thank you for your review man, means a good deal to me.

[-MrMaestro-(ST) Boss Battle]

Man are you ever going to stop...

making such great music? I hope you don't :D

At first it didn't really felt like a boss battle to me because of your 2nd pattern ( 10-15 seconds into the song ) where to me it felt like some sort of song about a hero going on his journey. But then after that little part it was right on spot boss battle.

The ending was really, how to say, abrupt? But i like it this way :D

I liked that chorus thing towards the end, it was fabulous. I can't think of something to tell you to improve on cause you are elite. Sorry for not making a constructive review :(

I commend you for making such great music and i hope to hear more from you.

[(_RGH_) Another Pot Pie(Pork)]

God damn nice intro!

Great track is pretty much all i can say. You seem to outdo yourself everytime you make a new song. Man you have great musical skills i give you that.

This is an awesome song. A great tension/momentum builder type, well to me anyways.

I can't really think of anything that i didn't enjoy in this song and you know what that means.
It means that you've got yourself a customer :D

Keep making music you are very good at it!

[FF8 - The Landing]

Very well executed.

Hey, long time no see, how's everything going for you?
Still working at that same place R18? I'm glad to see that you are still finding time to submit music.

This is actually my favorite piece in all of the FF8 music. It is very well done. I noticed that you didn't put the original intro i'm assuming as to keep the song as a loop. I like your choice of instruments although i would've really liked to hear a flute play a bit of the main melody. If there is well then nevermind, my mistake.

The sound of the cymbals got a bit annoying in the part where they play almost every second but other than that the rest is fine.

Good job on this track and i hope to hear some of your original compositions again/soon/someday :D

Grumbleduke responds:

Hah, I could say the same about you! Where have YOU been ;) ? As for R18, that's a video classification in England, that's basically XXX material that only licenced adult shops can sell it (I know it sucks). But yes I am.
You can thank MaestroSorrow for this one, it was his request. I did leave the intro out so it could loop, yes, and there is a flute line, but it is easily overpowered by the strings and brass that this piece needs for the energy you get from big loud instruments!

Do more music for me too, General!

[my definition of the world]

Great track man!

I love the piano! I think that your bassline could have done a little more then just follow the piano.
The strings add a nice touch to the song :D
The song does get repetitive after a while but it's still awesome.

Great job on this man, keep up the good work.
5/5

[Hollingsworth- Ignition]

Well ok...

Your songs are not bad. You've got percussions down pretty well. What you need is melody and bassline. Give it a shot you have got nothing to lose. Your percussions are good but it just becomes too repetitive. I've checked all of your songs and i think it's pretty much the same thing with all of them. Just needs more than drums. I'm not saying this to be mean, because i simply want to help you out.

Don't be too hard on yourself. I'll be checking this page from time to time to check your new music. I'm sure that with a melody you can make great songs.

[_-=[Weeping with the Rain]=-_]

Sad Saderson...

Yup, just as you mentioned in the self ad thread... you are sadness incarnate :D

Great track. That piano reminds me of my track "Melody of the Past" simply because it's in the same pattern more or so.

You have those little sounds playing in the background that should be a little louder. Other than that, everything is good.

This will be playing at my funeral, yea that's just how sad it is :D

You're becoming greater and greater with each track. You really have it, i mean, music is in you. So don't let it out.

5/5 Keep up the great work.

MaestroSorrow responds:

heh, then I might have to kill you General... I may very well have to kill you ^^.

Many thanks for the review.

[freezing cathedral]

Nice song!

I like this very much. The guitar is awesome. The only thing i didn't like was the beat. Not that it's bad but too repetitive. Other than that, great work. You get my 5.

mhb responds:

thanx leo. yeah the drum beat was made with pc drummer just so i could have some backing to it.