LoneEagle's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ambiance Schmambiance]

I like your 10 seconds of music very much :D

I like the melody alot in this one and the drums too. If only the bassline could have done something a little "wilder" shall i say. I only whish that this could have been a full song.

Still a very good job on this loop that could really be useful in some flash animations, cause i've heard many worst loops being used in some flashes :D

[Steinhau]

This could be great for...

any menu screen for a flash game. Because it is a short loop and that it loops almost perfectly.

I gave you 5 in diversity because this is too short not to be repetitive. But it doesn't take away the fact that this is still a good loop.

I'm sure that if you were to make a full song it would be very good.

[Why Cant I]

Very nice for a first!

Ok, i'll start with the cons and end up with the pros.

Your first pattern is too repetitive. Some drums would have been nice too, but not some heavy thing just a soft and sweet beat. I could picture some nice string melodies as well in this song.

I have to say, i for one think that you have a very nice voice :D The part where the pattern changes and you have those 2 guitars playing along nicely is very good.

I'm sure that you can make great things if you keep at it.

[For Bad Luck and for Worse]

Very nice song!

This is a very good track. My only problem with it is the electric guitar's volume. It is a little too high and overpowers the other instruments. Other than that, it a very good song.

Maybe changing some intruments at some point or adding some new things along the way would have given your song a less repetitive feel to it.

Still you managed to do a good job on this song.

[Weird L'il Song]

Hmm, i never used garage band...

so i don't know/can't say if those are just pure premade loops that you combined togheter or if this is something that you composed. But the fact remains that if you have figured the program out then it is time to make something new, something different, and with the expirience you will earn with time, something better.

This is not a bad "arrangement". Keep at it.

[you drive sporatic heartbeats?]

hmm, i don't know.

The beat is simple but not bad, the keys that you play are a little off and removes to the general appeal of the song.

This time i feel it took to much time before your song was really playing with all the instruments. At the first cymbal hit i thought that the song was over, and then came that wierd sound wich wasn't bad, nor good, just wierd :D

Maybe for the next song try and be little less repetitive. Well you'll see for yourself. I mean, the more songs you'll make the more experienced you will be. Keep at it.

[march of the young ones]

Very good song!

I like the many transition effects that you are making throughout the song but especially towards the beginning.

I like the way the song evolves, nice usage loops i should say :D Keep up the good work.

Cliche responds:

thank you very much
your comment is greatly appreciated

[English Spring]

I like your song

Well, there are some things that need working on, but the main idea of this song is very good. I like the piano's "ascension".

One major thing is the choice of instruments, especially the drums. I feel there are alot of better instruments to chose from in fruity loops, assuming that this is what you used to make your song, i could be mistaking.

A baseline that doesn't follow the piano could have been nice, just to add a little something different in there.

The piano melody is good, i'l give you that. The beat itself, regardless of instrument choice, fits the song pretty good.

Nice work on this song.

[AOE III Civil War Theme]

Hmmm, not half-bad...

This is very good work for a first song. I think this is a good overall piece. I think what needs to be worked on is your drums. Some timpani would have sounded great in this song.

Well keep at it, i'm sure you are bound to get better with each track that you make, good luck.

[_-=[Basking in Dead Light]=-_]

Well look at you...

You've become quite the mister popular. I see alot of gold and it ain't no fool's gold i can tell you that.

All the reviewing you are doing and all the hard work on your music is really paying off isn't it?
Well congratulations on all the good things that are and that will be coming your way.

Now onto the song. It's great XD You tricked me though, with the intro you had and with the title and the description i was expecting something with a little less beat.

At first i saw exactly what you had described "Standing around the dead, the moon, his only source of light, showing him the destruction" but then there was still more destruction to come because the final battle was about to begin - insert big story here -

The only thing that i didn't enjoy as much as the rest of the song is the snare drums. They seem to playing on a too high note. I hope you'll know what i mean. They sound kinda like claps and kinda like drums.

You sure are becoming something big out here on the AP, keep it up :D

MaestroSorrow responds:

cuz its a very very messed up snare drum, argh, how I regret putting that sucker in there, heh, good thing I messed it up here and not... uh... somewhere importantly important.

I didn't mean to trick you XD, sometimes my stories take you by the hand, and just drag you to where they want to go.

Thank you for your review man, means a good deal to me.