The intro was nice...
The percussions were nice as well. The little guitar thing got a bit annoying though, after like half of the song. It needs more diversity. Again in this piece you have some notes that clash with others. You have to be more careful than that. I'm not lashing at you now so don't worry. I remember what being new to music is so it's normal. With time you will really have an ear for music and you'll see the nice things you'll do later on.