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LoneEagle

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It's good...

It's good for a while but it is too much repetitive. I understand that it is how hip hop is and that is why i don't really like the genre.

Diversity is the key, having a bassline that differs from the main melody would be a great touch.

I see you are using many instruments and that is a good point. The beat ranges in the average/good. All that really needs working on in this piece is the repetitiveness.

Keep it up though man, you are getting better.

This is really nice.

Saw your add on the forums, thought i'd check it out.

This is a really nice piece. I really liked the first part, before you started playing on the high notes. There were some instances that were somewhat wierd, like when you have the same note repeating twice in a row, it didn't sound to good to my ear. The rest was good though.

This is a really nice thought out idea. And a surprising result, thankfully i can't really tell it's that song until the middle part.

Good job on this song, keep submitting to ng mate :)

ScionOfTheStorms responds:

Thank you very much, Fine sir. This review has definatly made my Day.

And keep up the great work on Reviewing peoples Audeo Work :D

Holy crap!

That song is amazing, yeah the first part is pretty familiar, where is from exactly?

Oh my, the song is so nice, i especially like all the little "fill ins" like the flute and such. This track is so diversified, and it also has a little "castlvania" charm to it.

Keep up the great work man and thanks for reviewing my music. And have a 5 why don't you.

Rythim-Man responds:

As much as the first part sounds familiar, I wouldn't know what it's from. For this song I actually tried something new. The first 2 measures of flute were random notes that I put in, then I felt that the melody seemed familiar, yet still nice. Then I played it over again with piano, adding into the equation harmony. I felt that it was dark enough for the theme I wanted to portray. After I found my melody and harmony, I put every orchestra sound I had together to finish the theme.

This is not a remix, even though at first it may sound like it. (I actually get that "where is this from" comment alot from this song)

I put extra effort into this, and it shows since this is my top rated song so far. Thanks for reviewing my good song and not one of my crappy ones.

Like I said before, my inspiration was believing I had lost a friend (and back when it happen I had extra care for my friends...don't ask what changed). I may be inspired to make one more orchestral piece before I set sail to my new home (I'm not really sailing and i'm not really changing residency, I'm just going away for school lol). Infact...the thought of going away just may be my inspiration....

And thanks for having such awesome music. I want to hear more some time, so~

Keep on keepin' on!

Extremely nice!

This track is awesome! I love the secong half more than the first but everything is really good.

I only think that your first synth is a little too loud and it's overpowering the other instruments. The song was a bit repetitive but not too much, it's not that big a factor.

The first snare that you used, i think it should've only been used in the intro. Once the bass kicks in i think another more powerful snare drum would have been appropriate. I know that you use another snare for the drumroll, i'm talking about the other one.

And i would have let the outro go on longer, like some fade out that you did but only longer.

This song is really good, alot of energy emanating from it. Makes me think about Mega Man but just a bit, as the melody is a little inclined towards that style of music :)

Good luck in the contest and keep on making the awesome music. 5/5

Pretty good!

Like everyone said, the recording quality really hurts this piece alot. I'm not really fan of this kind of music but i can get passed that and judge it for what it is.

I really like the little solo in the middle you had there. I would have liked a little more diversity o the drums though. The voice is ok, i couldn't make out one word of what you were saying but that's ok :D

If this weren't so glitchy and had a normal/good recording quality, i'd say this piece deserves a 4/5.

darkkloud responds:

thanks, im woprking on redoing this piece, with better rcording quality.

This could be in a movie :D

You know like we see the kids at school doing their thigs and then the bell rings and they all run out of class. Their chatter about this and that. You know typical movie scene :) I don't know that just what came to mind.

You know you are really good at making "happy" music. This and others like "Village Harvest" are amazing work of yours.

I don't have anything to say about the piece as it is perfect to my ears.

Keep up the good work and i'll keep on listening :)

5/5 on this and the Dryads one, i forgot to write it in it's review.

Holy wow!

This is such a beautiful song. The first half of the melody reminds me of something i heard before... oh well.

I have to say that i really love the harp and the flute in this piece. Maybe add some little bird sound fx, but very low volume, soft little bird noises lol.

The only thing i would have changed is the ending. I would remove the little silence part before the final notes and have it chained with the rest of the song.

All in all it's and awesome piece and i wish you the best of luck for this month's contest :)

It's ok for a first.

Well this is good for a first submission. The only thing is that it is way too much repetitive. One thing that i think is crucial though, don't make all your instruments play the same melody. Have the bassline play one thing and then have the strings play something different. Then have the guitar play something else. It's ok/good to have some instruments play a few of the same notes at the same time, like they just connected and then go back their seperate ways.

I think that you should make your tracks a little shorter too, because you are new to this and i think that you should concentrate on creating a song instead of working on the song's lenght.

The ending is pretty weird, with the "crash" because there are no crash sounds anywhere else in the song you know you can put some like at every 8 or 16 bar or more frequently if you wish.

A little drum variation could be good, like you have your main pattern and then at the 4th bar put in some extra snares and hi hats just to keep things interesting.

But for what it is, a first song, it's pretty ok. You used alot of samples and you didn't just threw things randomly.

So keep at it, you will get much better with time and practice.

G9 responds:

Thanks man... the song is very repetitive, and I do agree with your point of the bassline playing different from the other tracks... the ending was kind of abrupt/weird, but I didn't know how else to end it. :P Thanks for the tips, I'll apply them to my next song.

Thanks,
G9

Not another one...

Well, you have to do what you have to do. You and Milkman_Dan are 2 of the best out here on Ng, it's just a shame that it has to end but then again, all good things come to an end.

I have to say that i love the percussions in this track and the flute. I think the song kind of ended so suddenly. I mean right after the sleigh bell, i could have gone for another round :D

Ah man what else can i say, i hope you will get to read this one day. I just wanted to say thank you, honestly, thank you. Because of you and all the reviews that you gave me, it made me feel good about my music. It made me persevere and not give up. And today i can say that i have really improved because of you and others like you.

One day, i'm only dreaming here, one day i might become as good as you are right now and then i will say, "hey maestro come check my audio" XD

Seriously man, thanks again!

Hell yeah!!!

These are some good'ol memories of that old SNES game. Yeah the game sucked comapred to all the others. There were a few good songs like this one and the boss battles.

This is an excellent remake, did you get new samples or something? And what is going on with the awards thingy? You have to tell me all about it :D

Oh and could i request my favorite song from this game wich is the final battle of the game, i just like the song so much.

Fifen'd for great justice. See you later.

Grumbleduke responds:

I haven't had any new samples; I just went to town on a good song! I've used more synth tracks in this sing than any other though, even the FF9 Battle.

I'll keep people posted about the award I could be winning; I believe the actual AVN awards happen in January, so there's a long way to go my friend. Atm it's just a pre-nomination; it doesn't count for anything yet. I'm still hopeful though :).

Yes, the FInal Battle is also a good one; really catchy, just like this one. What a sucky final boss too; easy as Yu Yevon, done in the same way!

Hi, i make music as a hobby. From time to time i should upload a song. The best way to support me is to buy my music on bandcamp, it would really make my day. Share your art, take care, see you later.

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