Ok!
I'm pretty much gonna say the same thing here that i said for your first version.
Intro is shorter, that's good. You put your drums louder which makes the song alot better.
You added choir where there wasn't before.
To me those are all good improvements...
On the other hand, your "thunder" like sound was overused. I think you should use it less often and use it in key moments to give more intonation to certain parts of your song.
In the intro you have that one and same choir note playing, and i feel it is too long. Maybe just change it from time to time? And the last thing, the song ended too abruptly. Kind of "in my face", i would have liked a soft ending or something similar to your first song, a fade out.
Still this is a good improvement. I hope you submit more. Congratulations on your weekly top 5 :D