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Ok!

I'm pretty much gonna say the same thing here that i said for your first version.

Intro is shorter, that's good. You put your drums louder which makes the song alot better.
You added choir where there wasn't before.
To me those are all good improvements...

On the other hand, your "thunder" like sound was overused. I think you should use it less often and use it in key moments to give more intonation to certain parts of your song.
In the intro you have that one and same choir note playing, and i feel it is too long. Maybe just change it from time to time? And the last thing, the song ended too abruptly. Kind of "in my face", i would have liked a soft ending or something similar to your first song, a fade out.

Still this is a good improvement. I hope you submit more. Congratulations on your weekly top 5 :D

This made me think of castlevania...

the part after the intro that is. I like this piece, it's good.

The intro is a little bit too long, but once the song really starts, its great. Your drums need to be a little louder. I like the piano melody.

Keep at it, you're doing good music.

LOL!

All it needed was the little *click* sound between the suspense part and the happy part.
Still it's so funny... ah being on the forums is so great! LOL great job!

PERVOK responds:

Yes, i searched SO hard for that little 'click' sound but i don't have one...

..but this was good enough :D

Thanks for the review!

To put it in one word...

Amazing! You guys make an excellent duo. This song is pure beauty. The piano is wonderful. The strings and the choir as well.

This is a great relaxing peace. I hope you guys are planing on making more. Great work guys!

MaestroSorrow responds:

oh we will... we will.

MilkMan_Dan has offered to carry my baby, and though I refuse many many times, he simply won't stop offering.

SO I keep him busy with collabs ^^.

Many thanks for the review.

Simple yet very good.

I've checked your other pieces and this is the one that i liked the most from you for now. With time you will develop great skills, that i am sure of.

I really liked the intro, and those intruments you used. It would have been good if your strings played another melody instead of the same melody that the lead plays. Or keep the strings as they are and put something else in there just to keep it diverse throughout all the song. Some snares would have been nice too.

It's still a very good song. Keep at it, one day you won't even beleive the great things you'll make.

Dj-Edxtreme responds:

Thanks now i know that im somewhat good at this. XD

Awesome!

Fun fact : the begining threw me off completely because... because of that bassline. It was not to my liking very much, but then the rest of the song arrived and my mouth hit the floor.

This could be an excellent theme song to anything, i'm thinking some "spy" theme or some "highway chase" theme.
Hmm, as a combat theme, a little less, unless you mean some futuristic battle. I don't really see this in a rpg, but if it would be i would still enjoy it very much.

So far so good, i think what you just need is a little recognition, a frontpage or a weekly top 5 wouldn't hurt you, and you really deserver it. Great song, 5/5.

That's one good mega man song.

I like this song alot. It loops almost flawlessly. The drums volume are too soft in my opinion, i mean i can hardly hear them.

The guitars were good. I feel the song is a bit empty though, because you only have 2 guitars and a drumset. If there is a bass, i can hardly hear that as well. Not your best but still good.
4/5.

Grumbleduke responds:

I'm still getting used to the set-up I just got, so the levels are not perfect by any means. I agree it's not my best; my own stuff is my best :). Because I have to transfer the files from one computer to another, they sound different on each one.

There isn't really a bassline in this piece; just the rhythm and lead. The ryhthm line is supported by a rock organ, that's about as bass as I got. You'll see better form me soon.

I like the guitar.

It's an ok song to me. The flute intro i liked alot, the guitar too, but the harp melody kind of removed to that "western" theme you want. It felt to me like the desert vs. the ice cave.

It still builds a great suspense/atmosphere. Good work.

P.S. I don't have any connections :(

Grumbleduke responds:

Funny really, the harp is actually the same guitar, just 2 octaves up with modulating pan. OK I admit with two people saying it's not wild western I wrote the description wrong; I should have left it at just "deserty-type scenes", which makes a lot more sense.

LOL :D

This is a good song, but the animal sounds are just funny to me. All of your other instruments sound great.

This is just a preview, i know. If i was doing this song, i would have a good intro, decent in lenght and in that intro i'd have some river sound with your animal sounds and all, but not in the main song (i'm talking before the synths and everything). That's just how i feel about it. Those bells sound really nice, i usually have a problem with bells in songs because i don't feel that they sound natural.

Still this is a good preview. Can't wait for the real thing.

DavidOrr responds:

I agree completely about the animal sounds, I took all but the light wind/river/bird sounds at the beginning...sounds MUCH MUCH better. Hmm, I'll try out the intro you describe, it may work out quite nicely :). Thanks for the suggestions and review!

I like this song alot.

At first I was going to suggest that you put a nice beat on this track, and then it appeared, my wish had come true (you see i was reviewing while listening).

When i listen to this i see this great tribe leader who's about to kick some serious ass (that's the part where the beat picks up).

I really like the instruments you have in that song. You get my 5. Awesome work, keep it up.

RyeGuyHead responds:

why thanks general

Hi, i make music as a hobby. From time to time i should upload a song. The best way to support me is to buy my music on bandcamp, it would really make my day. Share your art, take care, see you later.

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